bag and tag it. This one is gold star in my book. Once again, I feel the art kicks the tame script's ass. Only one note: Panel 5, I end up reading Frostie's "back taxes" answer before Boy's "what're you in for?" questions. Consider bouncing boy's dialog to the left side so that it stays straight. Inverting the panel would work, but I don't know if that would muck up the art. Otherwise, sweet bajeesus, I love it. Fantastic work.
ok. getting there. gotta go home tho
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bag and tag it. This one is gold star in my book. Once again, I feel the art kicks the tame script's ass. Only one note: Panel 5, I end up reading Frostie's "back taxes" answer before Boy's "what're you in for?" questions. Consider bouncing boy's dialog to the left side so that it stays straight. Inverting the panel would work, but I don't know if that would muck up the art. Otherwise, sweet bajeesus, I love it. Fantastic work.
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